Hello there!
. Always like good stories. Keep me updated when you have more story lines. God Bless.
Wow. I am proud of myself. I am a writer, I really am no matter what I say.
But it plagues me to write descriptive paragraphs. That probably why I need a beta now and not after I've written a couple of chapters. But last night at work I wrote something.I'll put it up only because I think maybe I tried hard in the sense that I actually wanted to write it but in the sense that It scared me and I had to write it down.
Here it goes.
"As the sleepy corpses lay down, their worries slowly floating away, evil was brewing. Lies that trapped the residents of their senses, captivating them into the thickness of a web of deceit. Quickly engulfing them into a sea whose current would only hold htem under making sure that every last buble of hope left them."
Ahh. I am sacred. 